Language Arts and Adolescent Boys

So it has been awhile since I blogged and I am ready to get back at it. It is amazing the impact that writing can have on your life, especially when you don’t get time to do it.

Friday I had a unique opportunity to present at the Michigan Council of Teachers of English(MCTE). My presentation was about boys and literacy, mainly writing. I was very surprised at the number of people who attended my session. I think there may have been 5 or 6 seats open and that was it. I only write about this particular point because it was my first time presenting at this conference and i have heard from other colleagues that they didn’t have a lot of participants. Needless to say, I felt humbled.

I asked my participants to shout out some words that described boy writers. Those words included insecure, unmotivated, and reluctant. After hearing all of the words thrown at me, I proceeded with my presentation and before I knew it, my time was up. I received a round of applause and it was time for me to pack up and attend other sessions. As I have reflected on this past Friday’s opportunity, some thoughts have come to mind.

First, there is still a very real need to reach our boy readers and writers. I wouldn’t have had almost 40 people in my session on Friday if there wasn’t this need. How about we give them some choices when it comes to reading. When October 1st arrived, I put out all the books I could possibly find that dealt with Halloween, ghosts, and goblins. My favorite thing to do is to carry around a book or my kindle and have my kids ask me what I am reading. I love having a conversation about books and authors with kids.

Second, boys are feeling insecure about writing because we aren’t doing enough for them to not be insecure. This week I am going to try a boys writing club once a week during lunch time. If I give them an environment where they feel comfortable, perhaps they become more positive about writing.

Third, if you use technology in your classroom and in any of your lesson plans, you aren’t going to reach the boys in your classroom. The students in our classrooms are digital natives and their world is about cell phones, video games, and computers.

Finally, be open to the ways boys write in your classroom. I got a chuckle out of the people in my session on Friday and the look on their faces when I told them I let my boys write about guns, violence, and humor. Obviously there is a fine line, but at least let your boys be boys and write what is in their world.

Now, I know these aren’t all the answers, but at least give something a try in your classroom to help the adolescent boys resist the urge to put their pencils down.

Cheers!


Kids Really Do Like To Write

Next week on October 20th, is National Writing Day. Today I introduced my students to the prompt; Why I Write. Prior to having them begin our process of writing, we had some chuckles about the reasons they write. Some of my students stated they were “forced” to write when they are in school. I played along with them and let my students have their moment. One of my boy writers raised his hand and pointed out that the prompt was indicating he wrote outside of school and he insisted that he did NOT do any writing other than what was required of him in school. I smiled and proceeded to ask my students to raise their hand if they write text messages or do Facebook. Everyone’s hand shot into the air. I explained to them both of those are examples of them writing outside of school. It was almost like I took the wind out of their sails. The expressions were priceless.

My students were now ready to write and I can’t tell you how moved I was by some of their responses. I had a young man discuss how writing was a place to escape for him and how he could visit different places without having to leave the comfort of his room, classroom, or car. There were students who expressed how writing was a means of communication and they knew it was required of them in school. All of these were really well thought out responses and I was pleased with their effort. But, that wasn’t what made me feel uplifted as a teacher and a writer. I had two students in two separate classes both express how writing is a place where they are not judged. The pages did not question what they wrote or laugh at them. In addition, they wrote how it is their place of freedom where they can create whatever they want. After hearing each one of these journal writings, I stood silent and almost speechless. My mind finally jolted me to wake up and respond. All I could sputter out was WOW! Let me remind you this was in two different classes too.

It is safe to say that they get it. Kids and students truly do know the power of writing and what it can hold for each of them. I know I didn’t hear from all of my students, but I didn’t need to. I may not reach all of my students, but I know within the first 6 weeks, I have reached a few. What else can I say about writing, except WOW!

Cheer!


Should Reading and Writing be Separated?

Any of my readers who are from Michigan and are part of the education world knows the M.E.A.P. is upon us. After our students were done taking it today I had a great conversation with our special education teacher. He asked my opinion on if I thought the M.E.A.P test was one big reading test. His justification was the students basically have to read everything, even the math and science portions of the test. He continued to back his claim by explaining the science portion of the test is informational text that must be read by the students to answer questions. As I stood there listening, I can’t say I disagree with my colleague.

As we continued our conversation he asked a question of me that I am not sure I answered correctly. That is, if there is a right answer. He asked why reading isn’t taught anymore. What he meant was why isn’t it a separate class. I reassured him I do teach reading in my classroom. Not disagreeing with me, the conversation turned quickly to a discussion on how language arts classrooms are set up completely different than what they used to be. At one time reading its self used to be a separate subject taught in schools. English was basically writing and grammar. When I was in elementary school I vaguely remember, but I do know this was the case. We always received a separate grade for reading and English. Now, there are many reasons I could list here for why the two are combined and taught as language arts. I believe the biggest reason is because of the connection between reading and writing and how they go hand in hand. Ok, I am a language arts teacher, a reader, a writer, and I am on board with this. However, here is the dilemma I proclaimed to my colleague. We have seven hours in our school day. Each of those seven hours are divided approximately into 55 minute blocks of time for teaching. Being a language arts teacher, I barely have time to breathe because of everything I have to get through. Maybe my colleague is right, reading should be separated again into a separate class. As I have discussed before in my blog, I am struggling to find that balance with my students. I don’t think it is beneficial to my students for me to do a reading unit without there being some sort of writing assignment connected to it. For me, this is a no brainer, but how do I have time to do both reading and writing instruction in a 55 minute time slot. Oh, and I have grammar to teach.

Taking all of this into consideration, I still don’t feel the pendulum will be swung back to the way things used to be. Reading probably won’t be taught as a separate entity. With continuing education cuts across the nation and other professionals I know, who are my NWP colleagues, they are feeling the same pressures I am feeling. I am going to be keeping a watchful eye on how my classroom transforms over the next few years and how other classrooms transform.

Cheers!


Language Arts and Common Core: The Uphill Battle

We had our second department meeting this year, though it seems our department meets more than the required amount of times by our administrators. I am lucky to be part of a department that is so very passionate about language arts and how we reach students in the classroom. Today we were discussing the increasing demands we seem to be facing as language arts teachers. It seems we are being asked to implement more and more into the curriculum that we have in front of us. As language arts teachers in our district we feel the Common Core Standards are put together really well and much easier to work through on a whole. Our biggest task ahead of us is going to be working through the CCS and seeing what it is we do in our classroom and lining it up with the standards and then going back and plugging any holes where we are missing items. This is going to be a chore that we have to endure not only in our department meetings, but on our own time as well. Although this will be very beneficial to all of us at each level we teach, there are still questions left unanswered.

The biggest question we are still scratching our heads over is how to teach grammar efficiently I our classrooms. Let’s face it, handing out worksheets and going over examples on our whiteboards isn’t the most affective way to reach students. This “plug and chug” method turns us into worksheet teachers and in essence creates a somewhat toxic environment where students do not want to learn. Furthermore, as language arts teacher our backs are already up against the wall when students come into our classroom. More often than not, students don’t care much for language arts class. Now, since I have incorporated more digital tools into my classroom and changed my approach to writing with boys, language arts has been very pleasant and I hear more and more from my students that they like my class. But the questions remains, how do we get through everything in the curriculum, make our classrooms digital, and have grammar be engaging? Oh, and do all of this without feeling or getting burned out as teachers.

I don’t know how other teachers feel, but I feel like this year has flown by in a whirl wind. I also feel I haven’t covered everything I am supposed to as a language arts teacher. Is is okay? Are other language arts teachers feeling like I am? Perhaps it is because of my new teaching assignment or the overwhelming amount of paperwork. Nevertheless, I will continue to move forward and research new and innovative ways to reach my students. Jeff Anderson and Kelly Gallagher are two professionals who I have researched and have helped me transform my room into a much better place for students to learn. I know there are many other resources out there as well. NWP is a great group for resources too.

Cheers!


Focusing on Student’s strengths and Content

Some teachers, if given the chance to walk into my classroom, would have said I didn’t teach my students a damn thing today.  I beg to differ!

I started today with allowing my students to use their cell phones and our wiki page to do our writing into the day.  Today I asked the student to write about their strengths and weaknesses as writers.  The responses were phenomenal.  Answers included students favorite types of genres they have confidence in writing.  Other responses included their creativity and their ability to include a lot of details in their writing.  When it came to my students discussing their weakness, it was what I expected as a language arts teacher.  Most students wrote about specific conventions such as spelling, grammar, etc.  After a short discussion with them about over coming their weaknesses and how fixing conventions can be easy if you have other people check their writing, I focused on their strengths.  I talked to them about not focusing on the negative aspect of their writing, but to focus on what it is they do best.  I challenged them to explore their creativity.  Some students expressed concerns about never having an opportunity to write a mystery or a love story.  I simply told them to write it outside of class and I would do my best to find some contests where they could submit some writing they liked to do.  Oh, and extra credit isn’t always out of the question.  I talked to them about how at some point their switch was turned off for writing.  I reassured them, I would do my best to turn that switch back on.  Some of the boys reassured my ongoing research with boys and writing.  They were frustrated with the topics and types of writing they had to do.  They wanted to know why they couldn’t write about guns, war, and mild violence.  I smiled and said, why can’t you?  They looked confused, like who the heck is this guy and why is he letting me write about what I want to write about?  Yeah, I am that teacher. Get over it for those of you who think that I can’t.

Next, my 7th graders and I finished our wall charts for revision and editing.  I tallied up from all three sections of my 7th grade classes what were the most important areas to look at with revision and editing.  I was really bothered by one of the areas my students put as being important.  Proper heading was listed as one of the most important areas we should put on our classroom wall chart.  After doing some quick detective work and continued interrogation, I discovered they would lose up to five points in sixth grade if they didn’t put the proper heading.  So, what you are telling me is that if I am a student and I have a twenty point assignment and I mess up on my heading, I am going to lose five points and be at a C before my teacher even reads it?  No wonder students lose their passion to write.  We aren’t grading on proper headings.  Is it really that important my students can put their name, date, and hour in the upper right hand corner?  Ummm, let me think, NO!  Lets get real, we are after content here people.  Anyways, I calmed down and my students were feeling pretty amazed I would only knock off one point for not putting something right in their heading.

What are you focusing on in your student’s writing?

Cheers!


And So the Whistle Hangs

My shoes not removed for more than a moment, I hung the key up on the hook. It was then my hand brushed against it causing the hard plastic to bounce against the nylon cord. My head immediately went down to the floor and my mind flooded with many thoughts about what this time of year used to mean for me. I looked up from the cold cement floor of the garage and embraced the whistle into my palm. I squeezed it and closed my eyes. The realization slammed down on my as if a car fell on my back. My knees went weak for a moment and I took a few deep breaths and put the whistle back on hook. Instead of going into the house, I walked back out of the garage and tried to distract my brain from thinking about basketball. My efforts were all for not. I decided it was healthier to let my mind think about it instead of denying what it so desperately wanted.

Feeling like I just lost my childhood pet, I began to pout. I could feel my blood pressure rising. I started to become furious. I was doing everything my way, the right way and I am left standing with a whistle in my hand ready to cry. I know I have blogged about this before and I even denied myself the truth by saying I wasn’t missing it. After seeing that whistle today and feeling the small cork like ball rattling inside the whistle, I miss coaching right now. I don’t miss the parents, I don’t miss the attitudes that came with some of the players, and I definitely don’t miss the late nights. Plain and simple, I miss the game. Furthermore, I will miss the relationships I built with young people. I will miss teaching the life lessons that sports can have.

I am not one to dwell on the past, but basketball has been a part of me since I was in middle school. The positives about basketball being amputated from my being go well beyond the negatives. The time I get to spend with my family is time I can never get back if I were to still coach. Christmas break is going to be awesome this year. My wife and I can enjoy it together. I get to concentrate more on my classroom and my most important job, being a language arts teacher. Oh, and the amount of time I can spend doing things for the writing project is a positive too. I truly am an optimist and I do believe things happen for a reason. I know in the long run I will be better off. Oh, and this blog tonight is another reason why I write. Writing allows you to get your frustrations out and express your feelings. And so the whistle hangs.

Cheers!


Students Who Share Writing

Okay! After last nights awful blog, I have learned my lesson to not try and write a blog between 11:00 p.m. and 12:00 a.m.  I am going to redeem myself today by writing about students who share their writing.  By the way, I trashed the other blog and I apologize to those that follow.

Many of us are well into the school year and it is hard to believe we are approaching the half way mark to October.  Since September I have seen a slow but powerful transformation in my students as writers.  On occasion I like to sit on the floor with my students in a big circle and give people an opportunity to share a piece of their writing.  When I did this at the beginning of the school year this year, I saw very few hands rise in the air or most students simply stated, “Pass.” Developing a writers workshop where students are comfortable enough with their writing takes time.  As the teacher, you have to put yourself out there on a pedestal and be just as vulnerable as your students when it comes to sharing a piece of writing.  If students know you take a vested interest in writing, they will want to as well.  Over the course of just a month I have witnessed a unique transformation in my classroom.  Students are actively engaged in writing when it is time to do writing into the day, or it is independent work time for an assignment they need to complete.  Furthermore, I see more and more people share during our circle time in class.

One of the most wonderful things I like is students who approach me with their journals and want me to read what they wrote.  Seeing students genuinely excited about their writing gives me goose bumps.  I really appreciate students who want to share their creativity with me by walking up to my desk and leaving their journal with a page marker where they want me to read.  Students are starting to not only trust their classmates to hear their writing, but they are trusting me to read it.

In spite of the many strategies that are thrown at us as language arts teachers, I truly believe gaining a students trust is a chunk of the battle.  I had a student today comment on how she never liked to share before, but she felt more outgoing. I asked her if she was more outgoing or she just felt more comfortable and she replied that she felt more comfortable.  That is huge in my classroom.  Students need to feel that they have some worth, especially when it comes to their writing.

I am seeing some miraculous writers starting to emerge from their shells, boys and girls alike!

Cheers


Boys Literacy

Many of you who are my colleagues already know I am a huge advocate of boys literacy. It is my passion and it is my goal to help other teachers and educators understand the world boys live in and what will motivate them to read and write.

Today was one of those days in my classroom where I had to smile and say to myself WOW! So far this year I have incorporated some of Kelly Gallagher’s strategies for reading and writing. My students are doing one pagers, they are doing article of the week, and I am taking the approach he does with his students and letting my students read a novel without me interrupting every chapter and incorporating worksheets after every three chapters. In addition to the Gallagher strategies, I am infusing some of Ralph Fletcher’s ideas about letting boys choose their own topics when it comes to writing. Today I was seeing the pay off. First, in one of my 7th grade classes one of the boys commented on the novel we are reading and stated,”It is nice to read a book without having to do a summary after every page.” All I could do was smile. Upon receiving that positive feedback, another young man spoke up saying,”That is why I don’t read anymore.”. Can you say Readacide? I smiled again, but I know I have a long road ahead of me to get these students excited again about reading. On the other hand, it has already began.

Later on in the day, I had the students do writing into the day and I had two separate boys write short stories. One was about a girl scout getting shot over her delicious cookies. He proceeded to describe it like a hunter watching his pray through a scope on a gun. I thought it was about hunting deer, not a girl scout. The other boy wrote about a man who was diagnosed with cancer and was told by his doctor he only had so long to live. He then went to the diner to eat breakfast and was shot prematurely in a robbery before he died of cancer. His story continued with the man’s family suing the doctor because he died sooner than what the doctor said. I am not a huge fan of violence, but both of those students had some brilliant creativity. Both stories even had elements of humor. I applauded both of them and asked them how they came up with their ideas. They both shrugged but wanted to continue their writing. They were actively engage in their writing and they wanted to write. In the words of Vector on the Disney movie Dispicable Me, OH YEAH!

Today I became more convinced boys will like reading and writing if you give them the chance to like it. I know I won’t reach every young man, but I can sure try!

Cheers!


Remember Their World

I normally don’t blog on the weekend due to just stepping back and giving my brain a break, but I missed a few days this past week due to pure exhaustion from a very whirl wind week at work. I just noticed the alliteration there, sorry. Anyways, I also can’t help the emotions I am feeling on this cold Saturday night.

While driving back home tonight with my family we came across another family who had hit a deer. We slowed down to make sure no one was hurt or needed a phone to call the police. I think the buck they hit was bigger than their car. Myself being a hunter I wanted to weep because of the sheer size of the buck they hit. Well, everyone was doing fine and the police were already on their way. As I was speeding away, my four year old son was really concerned about the dead deer. He kept telling my wife and I that the deer was going to miss his family and he really wanted to know where his family was. Needless to say, my heart was melting and I had to fight back a few tears. My son knows at four years old how important family is and what it means to miss someone. We eventually convinced our son that his family would be okay and what was important is that the humans were not injured. Not a small task when you figure in a four year old.

This whole episode made me recall a conversation I had with a few colleagues about a student who we have all been having trouble with in our classrooms. We all have had students like this in the past. Whether it is a class clown, an attitude problem, or a child who just refuses to learn; these types of students can make or break our day as a teacher. These students usually make us go into a rage about what we’re going to do or what is wrong with this child, maybe it even makes us take an occasional glance at their files in the office to gain some insight into what makes them tick.

This past week I was reminded not to forget where some kids come from. What do I mean? Most of us go home to our families and we see our spouses, kids, the dog or cat and sit down to a nice meal with each other. We have a nice warm bed to turn into at night and our bellies our more than likely full. Their are students out their in all of our classrooms that don’t get these luxuries. Students come from split homes, sometimes have to watch their younger siblings, and might even have to cook supper. How about those students who have parents that can’t afford health care and has to sleep in a room where there is a mattress on the floor? I have heard of students sharing a bedroom with six other siblings. It really doesn’t matter the situation. My point is as educators we need to keep in mind where some of our students come from. Before we jump into a student about them not completing their homework, check to see what kind of home life they may have. I am not saying to give them excuses, but perhaps this allows us more compassion into our hearts. I know after this past week and what my own child said; kids find value in family, love, and daily routine. Sometimes we may be the best part of their day!

Cheers!


Why I Write – Part 1

I don’t think it is remotely possible to complete a blog about my passion for writing and answering the simple question; why do I write? I assure you this will be one of many blog posts about why I write.

To begin with, I write because it is my release. It is the place where I can go to when I need to vent about anyone and anything without actually having to do it orally. It essence it is my therapy. The pages of my writing journal are always willing to listen to me and those pages are constantly talking back to me when I revisit my journal to read what I have written. Writing is my best friend. Furthermore, I see writing as my canvas where I can create narratives, poetry, fiction, memoirs, blogs, texts, etc. The idea that I can express myself in more than one genre gives me goosebumps. Throw all the digital tools into my writing holster and you will see multiple digital pieces to be shared with everyone.

Besides using writing as my own release and palette, it is important to look at my educational purpose behind my writing. Since I can remember I have always valued writing and how important it is for all students to learn how to write and how to write well. I still believe this whole heartedly. I used to think I had to teach my students about 5 paragraph essays because it was on our state mandated test. I stood in front of my classes barking at them to have an introduction, 3 body paragraphs, and a conclusion. I should of listened to what my heart was telling me and taught my past students about how texting is writing, what a digital story is comprised of, and how to write a blog. All of these examples may not have been possible then to teach, but nonetheless. Truth be told, I feel as if I have failed some of my past students.

I believe there is some sort of witty saying out there about how one must fail to learn and move on to success. However the saying is supposed to be written out or expressed, I feel I am making my students more successful because I am not only teaching my students the importance of writing, but I am teaching them different venues and genres to express themselves. My students are actively engaged in writing every day in my classroom because I have opened up a world that is much bigger than 5 paragraph essays. Included in this new idea of teaching, I am doing something I very rarely did before and that is how I show my students my own writing and my thought processes that I have as I go through my writing. I can’t tell you how much farther I get with my students and their writing.

Okay, now that I have rambled I want to express how I came to some of these points in my writing career. I write and I have transformed my writing because of the renewed confidence I have due to going through the summer institute at CMU. The Chippewa River Writing Project, the satellite site of the National Writing Project has given me something I can never forget. That something is confidence, passion, and desire to be a writer and to teach writing. I owe where I am at as a teacher and a professional now, to the writing project. I have a raging fire inside me every day that wants to write and be heard. I have been shown that I have a talent and others want to hear about it. This is why I write!

Cheers!